I'm jealous of Shel Silverstein!
I have always loved all of his poems
His book a light in the Attic.... He makes me jealous
I love his poem Sick
Its funny,
Its totally true, and easy to read
Its not to long...
He makes me jealous!
I want to write a poem thats funny, real life, and people enjoy reading it.
You over achiever you! This just got assigned like 30 minutes ago, MAX! But I'm with you, the GOOD funny poems-that still make you think-are some of the best.
ReplyDeleteshort sweet straight to the point... i like it! but i do think you could've gone into a little more detail as to why you are jealous.. like tell more about the book a light in the attic or his poem sick and what parts you like most and why. Ya know? anyways just a suggestion but i still thought it was good so good job!
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